Change the storyline

After working on my animation for few weeks, there are some changes on the animation that I made.



The first one is the story title. The title is 'The love of grandma' before. However, it seems too straight forward. It tells the main idea to the audience directly. So I will change the title to 'Leaving'. This title can give some space to audience to image. Who is going to to leave? where is he or she leaving to? What happen because of his or her leaving? These questions might come out before watching the animation.



Another thing I changed is the content. In the project proposal, the story is about grandma feels so nervous when her grandson has a check in the hospital. The main plot of it is to describe her nervous through different action. Now what I want to present in the animation is that her grandson will study abroad in the next few days. She finds it in the calendar and feels sad about it. She plans to do something before he leaves. She decided to make a scarf to her grandson a s gift. After receiving the scarf, her grandson feels so moved and leave with tear. The last scene is that grandma stands in the mirror in the airport, witnesses the plane takes off.